A Treatment Of Sorts...
Yes. I have gotten as far as to write a treatment. Is it a good treatment? That's for you to decide.
Here you go for download, it's the 5th draft so far. I've done a lot of changes to cut down HARD on my locations. I went from something like 4 or 5 locations to 2. I also really cut down on my characters and number of scenes that I needed to have all of them in. Like I think I had 4 characters in 4 or 5 scenes, but now it's something like 2.
Basically, I'm simplifying things. It needs to be done sooner or later or else I'm just going to end up crying on the floor.
Ok, I've talked enough, here's the treatment.
Draft 6(Right click and save)
(This is updated from draft 5, to draft 6.)
Enjoy. Feedback if you like.
Here you go for download, it's the 5th draft so far. I've done a lot of changes to cut down HARD on my locations. I went from something like 4 or 5 locations to 2. I also really cut down on my characters and number of scenes that I needed to have all of them in. Like I think I had 4 characters in 4 or 5 scenes, but now it's something like 2.
Basically, I'm simplifying things. It needs to be done sooner or later or else I'm just going to end up crying on the floor.
Ok, I've talked enough, here's the treatment.
Draft 6(Right click and save)
(This is updated from draft 5, to draft 6.)
Enjoy. Feedback if you like.
posted by Ryan T at 10:58 PM
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